Tuesday, September 9, 2014

Setting: Daytime High -Noon First character enters Amos - Male child, ranging from ages of 6-7 yo Plot: Amos is holing a handwritten card/invitation to a party for an exclusive club. Reads YOURE INVITED RING POP CLUB WHERE: 1234 JULIANS BACK YARD ST BRING YOUR SPESHELL SOMEONE He’s reading the card down, camera is panning down and after he finishes, card goes down, and the camera pans up to see the clubhouse. Clubhouse - big cardboard cut out shack. Looks like children using boxes, duct tape and other household items constructed it. Screen directions Amos looks at the location curiously, wondering if he’s at the right place. Shrugs his shoulders Scene II Inside the clubhouse is vibrant, bright atmosphere, with luxurious décor in the manner of a well-decorated venue. Idea: Imagination Warp The image of the characters switches from a more adult-like atmosphere Scene III Amos is immediately greeted by Julian. Julian is a male child, ranging from ages 6-7 y/o. Julian: Hey! You made it! *hugs Amos* Amos: *smiles* Julian introduces Penny Penny - female character Julian’s Bride Julian: this is my best friend in the whole wide world my special someone Penny! Julian: So where’s your special someone? Amos: On the way. Julian: I can’t wait to meet her! Amos: wait but- Julian interrupts- Julian: Let me show you around-Penny will be demonstrating the club activities for us. The next scene explains all the benefit the children get from being in the married club. Julian leads Amos down a long hall way with activity rooms. Julian: Joining our club is a good way getting lots of the things that you want and need Like the free candy store Cartoons Ball pit Jumping moonwalk Games When joining each couple receives- An annual party -like an extra birthday for you and your special someone Issued a Teddy bear with all the bear accessories, for the two of you to play, “house” Double allowance to get more toys and candy It’s another way of keeping playtime alive! No more- “I don’t wanna play any more”- “nuh unh you gotta play until the end!!!” Seymour arrives male character 7 ½ yrs old -Amos’s partner Seymour walks into the clubhouse nonchalantly checking out the place (looking around) Julian: Who are you? Amos: Julian! This is my “special someone!” “Seymour.” (hinting at Seymour). The transition of the nice fancy club is converted into the dark cardboard clubhouse. A long awkward silence arises The kids are looking at each other Penny is touched an excited about Amos and Seymour Julian is in a state of shock Amos smiles and takes Seymour’s hand Seymour is looking around at the place wondering who turned the lights off. Penny: Aww look Julian they are so cute together. Julian confused/puzzled: I didn’t know you were-Penny interrupts- Penny- We are glad to have you! Amos-Seymour So… We are ready to join your club Julian: (sighs) I guess we can make arrangements for you two, but it won’t be the same (rolls eyes with an attitude) Amos: what do you mean? Julian: well the club is meant boys and girls to join in together. Its not the same Julian you cant get a free teddy bear and What are you gonna do when you play “house” you don’t have a mommy and daddy Julian*Confession booth*Mom stays at home cooks cleans feeds baby Dad gets a job works provides for the family. Amos: Why can’t Seymour and me take care of a bear? Julian: well you can’t get a “free bear” you have to adopt one and get your own accessories! Amos: Why do the other bears get special treatment? Why cant our bear get the same accessories Can kids that don’t want to take care of teddies join the club? Julian: yeah well some kids like taking it easy. Every one isn’t cut out for a teddy bear you know it’s a big responsibility. Julian: besides the rule says that only girls and boys can join together. Its always been this way since…. since forever. Amos: *confession Booth*I wonder if people always kept rules that helped some people get better treatment than others? That just doesn’t seem fair. Confession booth in the confession booth the kids explain their points of view in a documentary style. Amos- how can tradition be a reason for anything? Seymour -tradition is stupid Penny: Julian I have two dads Julian: Whaat ? Penny: Why don’t we just play a different way so Amos and Seymour can have fun with us? Julian: No its my club house! Amos: C-mon are we hurting someone Julian: Yes you are hurting the club Seymour: (Looks around) It seems fine to me Julian: WELL ITS HURTING! (Julian’s sudden out burst surprises everyone) Amos: What’s the worst that can happen Julian? Julian: A thought bubble arises from Julian’s mind : he imagines the entire club rioting, fire balls are falling from the sky, and Penny and Julian are forced to flee with their teddy bear. “Terrible things.” Amos: Do you not wanna be friends with us anymore Julian: Yes I wanna be friends Penny : Lets take a vote! How can we break this down into children version of three of those things

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