Tuesday, September 9, 2014
Setting:
Daytime
High -Noon
First character enters
Amos - Male child, ranging from ages of 6-7 yo
Plot:
Amos is holing a handwritten card/invitation to a party for an exclusive club.
Reads YOURE INVITED RING POP CLUB
WHERE: 1234 JULIANS BACK YARD ST
BRING YOUR SPESHELL SOMEONE
He’s reading the card down, camera is panning down and after he finishes, card goes down, and the camera pans up to see the clubhouse.
Clubhouse - big cardboard cut out shack. Looks like children using boxes, duct tape and other household items constructed it.
Screen directions
Amos looks at the location curiously, wondering if he’s at the right place. Shrugs his shoulders
Scene II
Inside the clubhouse is vibrant, bright atmosphere, with luxurious décor in the manner of a well-decorated venue.
Idea: Imagination Warp
The image of the characters switches from a more adult-like atmosphere
Scene III
Amos is immediately greeted by Julian.
Julian is a male child, ranging from ages 6-7 y/o.
Julian: Hey! You made it! *hugs Amos*
Amos: *smiles*
Julian introduces Penny
Penny - female character Julian’s Bride
Julian: this is my best friend in the whole wide world my special someone Penny!
Julian: So where’s your special someone?
Amos: On the way.
Julian: I can’t wait to meet her!
Amos: wait but- Julian interrupts-
Julian: Let me show you around-Penny will be demonstrating the club activities for us.
The next scene explains all the benefit the children get from being in the married club.
Julian leads Amos down a long hall way with activity rooms.
Julian: Joining our club is a good way getting lots of the things that you want and need
Like the free candy store
Cartoons
Ball pit
Jumping moonwalk
Games
When joining each couple receives-
An annual party -like an extra birthday for you and your special someone
Issued a Teddy bear with all the bear accessories, for the two of you to play, “house”
Double allowance to get more toys and candy
It’s another way of keeping playtime alive! No more- “I don’t wanna play any more”- “nuh unh you gotta play until the end!!!”
Seymour arrives male character 7 ½ yrs old -Amos’s partner
Seymour walks into the clubhouse nonchalantly checking out the place (looking around)
Julian: Who are you?
Amos: Julian! This is my “special someone!” “Seymour.” (hinting at Seymour).
The transition of the nice fancy club is converted into the dark cardboard clubhouse.
A long awkward silence arises
The kids are looking at each other
Penny is touched an excited about Amos and Seymour
Julian is in a state of shock
Amos smiles and takes Seymour’s hand
Seymour is looking around at the place wondering who turned the lights off.
Penny: Aww look Julian they are so cute together.
Julian confused/puzzled: I didn’t know you were-Penny interrupts-
Penny- We are glad to have you!
Amos-Seymour So… We are ready to join your club
Julian: (sighs) I guess we can make arrangements for you two, but it won’t be the same (rolls eyes with an attitude)
Amos: what do you mean?
Julian: well the club is meant boys and girls to join in together. Its not the same
Julian you cant get a free teddy bear and
What are you gonna do when you play “house” you don’t have a mommy and daddy
Julian*Confession booth*Mom stays at home cooks cleans feeds baby
Dad gets a job works provides for the family.
Amos: Why can’t Seymour and me take care of a bear?
Julian: well you can’t get a “free bear” you have to adopt one and get your own accessories!
Amos: Why do the other bears get special treatment?
Why cant our bear get the same accessories
Can kids that don’t want to take care of teddies join the club?
Julian: yeah well some kids like taking it easy. Every one isn’t cut out for a teddy bear you know it’s a big responsibility.
Julian: besides the rule says that only girls and boys can join together. Its always been this way since…. since forever.
Amos: *confession Booth*I wonder if people always kept rules that helped some people get better treatment than others? That just doesn’t seem fair.
Confession booth in the confession booth the kids explain their points of view in a documentary style.
Amos- how can tradition be a reason for anything?
Seymour -tradition is stupid
Penny: Julian I have two dads
Julian: Whaat ?
Penny: Why don’t we just play a different way so Amos and Seymour can have fun with us?
Julian: No its my club house!
Amos: C-mon are we hurting someone
Julian: Yes you are hurting the club
Seymour: (Looks around) It seems fine to me
Julian: WELL ITS HURTING!
(Julian’s sudden out burst surprises everyone)
Amos: What’s the worst that can happen Julian?
Julian:
A thought bubble arises from Julian’s mind : he imagines the entire club rioting, fire balls are falling from the sky, and Penny and Julian are forced to flee with their teddy bear.
“Terrible things.”
Amos: Do you not wanna be friends with us anymore
Julian: Yes I wanna be friends
Penny : Lets take a vote!
How can we break this down into children version of three of those things
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